First Line Prompt

The Challenge: Take the first line “I have to do something to help that child” and write a story.

ā€œI have to do something to help that child,ā€ she whispers.

I lean closer, rest my palm on her leg to hold her still.  ā€œAbsolutely not.ā€  I try to hit her with my best I-mean-business glare, eyes narrowed and lips pursed.  The look I used to get from my High School English teacher when I talked out of turn.  ā€œYou do nothing.ā€

I feel her relax, slightly.  Her weight shifts back toward her rump.  ā€œFine.  Whatever.ā€

Across the room, the child scribbles something and sighs.  The sound is too loud, too dramatic, for the situation.  We both turn our attention to her, watching.  She throws both her hands up, sandwiching her face between them and sighs again.  ā€œI don’t know how to do this,ā€ she whines.

Again my partner’s weight shifts.  ā€œLet me just go see if she’s made–ā€

ā€œNo.  Just let her struggle.  Watch, wait.ā€  The truth is, I don’t know if this plan will work or not.  All I know if we have fought with this child about her homework every single day for the last month.  There have been tears from both parties.  There have been assignments that I know were not successfully completed.  There have been assignments that we gave up on.  This week I have convinced my wife to let me handle homework in a different way.  This week I decided to let her fend for herself, our eight year old, and see what comes of it.  It’s Wednesday  We made it through Monday easily.  We made it through Tuesday with only a little bit of struggle.  Now the real battle has kicked in.  It’s the paragraph that did it, I think.  I keep hearing my little girl whine about ā€œfive whole sentencesā€ and I’m sure that’s the part that’s done her in.  Of course it would be easier to ā€œsuggestā€ ways to write the sentence, but then we end up with the fighting and the tears.  No, this is the way this week.  She will get through it.  ā€œWe have to let her do this.ā€  I say the last thought out loud, sharing it, willing it to be true.

At the table, the pencil is pinched between the fingers again.  The tongue finds its home at the corner of the mouth, slowly wiggling along the upper lip as the words begin to form on the page in front of her.  There’s writing for a full minute before the pencil is flung back down.  ā€œDONE!ā€ she bellows.

ā€œDo we check it?ā€ my wife asks.

ā€œDo you have enough sentences?ā€ I call.

ā€œYes.ā€ Not even a glance down at the paper.

ā€œHow many?ā€

Pause, looking at the paper.  ā€œFive.ā€

ā€œGood job.  Did you answer the question?ā€ I ask.

ā€œYes.ā€

A whisper from my elbow, ā€œShe could be lying.ā€

I shrug.  ā€œAre you lying?ā€

Her little blonde hair goes flying as she whips her head around to shoot me with a glare that perfectly communicates her irritation with my doubt.  ā€œNo.  It’s good.  Do you wanna read it?ā€  

I smile.  ā€œNope.  I trust you.  Put it in your backpack and go wash up for dinner.ā€

I wait until she has disappeared around the corner before smiling at my wife.  ā€œThere, done.ā€ I kiss her gently on the lips.  ā€œAnd no one cried.ā€

Her lips tip up to the right, her I’m-still-not-admitting-defeat smirk.  ā€œIt’s only Wednesday, bub.ā€

ā€œJust admit it, I’m right.  This is working.ā€

She chuckles.  ā€œOne, we haven’t seen the grade for homework this week.  Two, that was painful to watch.  Three, and most importantly,ā€ she rises and heads for the kitchen, ā€œwe have two more nights of this and spelling sentences are tomorrow.ā€

She flicks her hair over her shoulder as I feel my confidence drop like a concrete brick in the water.  ā€œOh God, spelling sentences,ā€ I whine.  

Homework is going to be the death of me.

 

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